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I appreciate for the feedback and honesty lol Snoink thanks for being honest and straight up .)

I'm pretty much speechless:O... Nice poem keep writing! (what you wrote actually made me think (hardly happens) )

haha thanks>) I tried to make it rhyme but i couldn't find the words so i tried to make it flow lol but I'm glad you love the poem heheh

Wow ..... I like, I like , and I like. I only read chapter 3 and this one I find it very amusing to flowed very well,the imagery was nice>) ...

Thanks for the feedback, Ishryock2 I don't know how I come up with these words..I just do>)

Pretty well written. I enjoyed reading it; i don't have anything big to critic about this piece. Pure of heart is a good title and keep writing!

I truly love the simplicity in this poem yet the meaning it has is heavy on the heart. Really Good job keep it up.. I would like to see more ...

Thanks for the feed back I realized that, it was really a typo (sorry for the mistakes) And yes i will be writing more reviews. Again i appreciate it(Now to ...