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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Flutter By

    It was just beautiful I really liked it. You are a great writer and I think that you should leave this as it is it s very very good

    May 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: XXX

    It was really good bu a little to short I think that it could be much better if you added some more to it. Even though I thought that it ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Could You?

    I think it is beautiful. The perfect length and really meaningful. you are an amazing writer keep writing good job

    May 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Pain

    Beautiful poem you are an amazing writer. The length was perfect. I liked how the lines were shorter at the beginning. I think that you are great keep writing.

    May 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You

    Good job. The poem was just beautiful Keep writing.

    May 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Brokenhearted

    Beautiful. It is short but it says so much. It had I felt like it was a little bit short but I still felt the emotions that you were trying ...

    May 20, 2011


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon