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Thanks! I appreciate your comments, and I'll certainly apply what you've said to my work :) Again, thanks for taking the time out to read my work and evaluate it.

First, thanks for your comments. :) Montgomery, as a public school educated young man, has only just joined the army, so his speech has not yet been impeded by the ...

Hey :) Thanks for the feedback - I have in fact already written up to Chapter V of this novel, so no worries on where it's going - I'm set ...

Thanks for the great review! I noticed the cliche, but its fine i reckon :) thanks again! :)