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Aw, thanks for reading this again, and I'm going to write more which explains the origins of the girl - but thanks, you make some valid points ^^

*? I missed a question mark somewhere in there ^_^

Thankyou :)

Thankyou :D :D

thanks for the review Myth ^_^ this was intended for a competition in which the story had to be less than 1,000 words. And yes, it was a crime competition ...

thanks for the ideas, I found this going through some folders on the pc and i think I meant it to be the prologue to something a lot longer when ...

Thankyou :)

*get back to editing. :)

Just to explain, there is a prequel to this, which I will get back to (eventually) - just that since I have so many ideas for the second one I ...

Thanks :)

Thanks for the ideas

Lol, thankyou for your ideas :)

thankyou for the feedback niteowl :D

lol, thanks for the feedback :)

Hey, Ok so, This described the family's situation really well. I got a really good feel for where they are, the things that their dad is going through (with trying ...