AnnWest

Thank you so much, I'll definitely try to fix those things. As for the second to last line, in my head it made it sound like she was taking extra ...

Thank you so much for your comment! It was extremely helpful, and I will take those things into consideration. As for the ending, it was supposed to sound like she ...

And you say "we're" like your containing a group of people in a bubble and certain people who may have the same issues don't understand. I understand what it's like ...

I'm sorry if this offends, I too suffer from depression and anxiety so it wasn't meant to sound like a joke. It's a description that explains my poem, a poem ...