AngusMacdonald

Ah thank you! I'll try and lay off the flashy words and pretty phrases haha! thanks again

Thank you! I think I'll do a bit of an edit and add some more explanations and descriptions and stuff and put it up soon! oh and Rhett was supposed ...

Hi thank you! Yeah I think I was trying to be a bit too clever for myself, and i didn't really explain, this was meant to be like the first ...

Thanks for the reviews guys, I added in another paragraph to try and make it more original. What do you think?

Not a clue about the meaning mate, is the persona commiting suicide? Great poem even if I don't get it on my quick read, sorry about the rushed response. Great ...