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Re: No Rest For The Wicked~1
Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about this story. Somehow I'm in the middle of liking it and hating it. It seems to be quite rushed, and the characters ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Lost 'Till You're Found (2)
Dun Dun DUN! --Busted. ---- Nothing was working, everything felt like she had been welded to the floor by some master craft's man and even her vision blurred. I don't ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Lost 'Til You're Found (1)
Woah, I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews. It's a brilliant idea -female assassin- but it has been done to death, but it's nice to see your own spin ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Jerry
Hey Eli, Anger here whether you like it or not :P I'll be basing my entire critique on three things -maybe four-: Opening, Characterization, Format and loosely on Conflict. Opening ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Pieces of Time
Oh wow. I read this and I couldn't help but comment on it. So let the reviewing -however lame it might be- begin. Opening Your writing style is what really ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: The Neighbor
Hello, Anger here. I really liked this experiment, I thought it was incredibly interesting and in ways a bit sad. Both character's are very introverted and they both lose out ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: No. 4
Hello, Anger here. I haven't been reviewing poetry in awhile so don't take my reviews too seriously. She floats off the ground like a fairy, How does she float of ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Hey Dude, It's me the coolest person you will ever have the chance to meet :D. Seeing as you told me to review this, I will. I liked it, especially ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: The Snowman
Okay wow, I actually quite enjoyed that. It was a disturbing, somewhat macabre story about a snowman, yet I find myself sort of feeling sorry for him. There are some ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: On a clear winter night.
Hey Hoppeh, you're my first review this review Sunday -be happy-. Anyway, on with the review. I liked the idea behind this piece, and it's beginning was great the way ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Starlight
I feel like I'm going to be the evil person going, I really didn't like this because, I didn't. I wasn't as impressed with this poem, as I normally am ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 4)
Hey Slave, I haven't read what the other reviewers have said so sorry if I end up repeating a couple of things. Seeing as I haven't read the last couple ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: After the Blast
Hi Meme, I liked this up to a point. The first paragraph was funny, informative, beautiful, well worded...but then the second one kinda made my head spin. It just didn't ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Free
Like Meme (Mimmi) I've read a load of stories like this, but never in this form. I think the form of writing enhances the piece, simply because it manages to ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Away
Hey Flux. This is quite an emotional -If that is the word I'm looking for- story. Your MC has a problem, most likely the fact that he's delusional and that ...
Jan 6, 2011
