Angels-Symphony

you captured All then it faded, twisted. If you're using proper punctuation, why don't use capitalize the first letter in the sentence? black, gray, bits of blue there's yellow too. ...

Hey Incognito! This story resembles a short story I read a quite a while ago, too much for me to ignore. I'll link you to that story. Choice by W. ...

Hey Rlw ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Michael stared almost hypnotically into the whirlpool of shadows that was the entrance to the ironically named sunlight falls woods. Oh, goodness ...

Hey Angel ^^ Shina here as requested ;) “Pain without love.” Three Days Grace Is this a quote? Or a chapter name? IT doesn't seem to be apart of the ...

Hey Gsp ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Past countless trees they ran, neither gaining nor reducing [s]any[/s] distance between them. The punctuation should be: "Past countless trees, they ran, ...

Hey Dakota ^^ Here as requested ;) I'm a fan of Elves and fantasy, so I'll be extra picky with how you portray them :P Wyndolyn could feel the blood ...

Shina here as requested ;) Her mother calls *Her voice so sweet *Her is repetitive, so perhaps changing it to "a" And sing to you All through the night I'm ...

Here as requested ^^ I'm not particularly trained to critique lyrics, but I'll try xD [s]Well[/s] You are my best friend [s]You are[s] a ray of sun I think it ...

Hey Magnus ^^ Shina here for a review as requested ;) “It appears to be the remains of a glass slipper,” I said, squinting through my magnifying glass. The splintered ...

Hey Jetback ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Sometimes the trees called his name on the wind. This is a decent hook, but I think it needs some rewording. I ...

Hey Chaos ^^ Shina here :P And since you asked for it, the instructors will bring it ;) First things first, please use proper grammar. "For real's" is really not ...

Hey Forever ^^ As promised, a review for you this evening ;) However, I do warn you that when it comes to review, I'll be straight to the point, but ...

Hey Author of 15 ^^ I'm Shina, one of the instructor-greeters here on YWS! So, welcome to YWS! This morning I'll be doing a review for you. Hello, I am ...

Hey Wolf ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Sorry I'm a bit late O_O The review thread was going slow for a while, I forgot to check back. I'll make ...

Hey Frag ^^ Shina here for a review as promised ;) Sorry I'm late, my sister and I were making a map for my fantasy novel O_O It took us ...