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Re: A World Apart
this is very good but i dont understand what is happening to your girl maybe you should add more to it
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Best Friend
aww i still think this is good but i think u should add more detail to it
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Love Lies
aww this poem brought tears to my eyes i love it though and i think u should publish this one
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Kissing under twilight
i loved this poem it reminds me of my ex its a sweet poem
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: crying on the cross
very cool poem it fits this season well and the title is what cought my eye first
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: The Best Friend
I love that poem Mel about the two best friends!!!!!! Keep going girl!!!
Nov 18, 2010
