AngelMarie

it's super hard not to tear up while reading this. I say keep it going it's great! :D keep up the fantastic work!

Also To Zaddie, what would you suggest to a replacement word or words for 'loved ones'? I want it to be broad enough to include friends and family but not ...

Thank you guys so much! Like I said I'm not a great poet but i really think this is one of my better ones. I know the grammar is bad, ...

This is sweet I really like it. I love the elemnets of the story, that Barry can't talk and Ella can't see! It's a good story! :D

Thanks for the review. Yes I know I need to work on My punctuation a lot, and I'll try and edit it soon. The plot gets a lot thicker in ...

Thank ya Seraphina! I have edited so it will be easier to read and i have changed Katy Perry to somone i made up. LOL thanks for your review! and ...

haha okay i'll change katy perry and space it out some thanks for the review! :D

I really liked this a lot, everyone else has already pretty much summed up the little mistakes so I'm just here to say i liked this a lot(: keep it ...

MORE I NEED MORE!!!!! haha this is amazing, you had me hooked from the first chapter, and now i'm hanging on a cliff! keep writing!(: its great, it really is!

I think its great! you never cease to amaze me! (:

thank you so much for your wonderful help! I don't usually write poetry so I'm not the best. haha but i really appreciate your critique, and it will help me ...

i really like this poem alot! i could feel the deep emotions in it, and it had me drawn in til the very end! Other than what Kiwi pointed it ...

i like this one, my dad smokes and i hate it! if doesn't take away the appeal i don't know what will. i like your writing style! keep it up!(:

not really my type of genre, but it is really good writing. It was like toy story, but you made it into your own, it was great, even though i ...

omg this is amazing! keep it coming coming because now i'm hooked! i Can not wait to see what happens next! (: