AngelKnight900

This is beyond interesting and I can't wait to read the following chapters. Please keep me informed about this story because I'm already in love with it. :D

I really enjoyed reading this and did see a few mistakes though. Nothing serious. Just some places where there should have been a comma or a period such as this ...

I agree with your previous reviewers. This does have potential but it has some flow issues. I struggle with the same thing. What I recommend is for you to put ...

Hello there. I, too, am a fellow christian and this is the second poem that I've read by you. What I will comment on is that this poem does have ...

I'm really enjoying following this and I can't wait to read the rest of the novel. One thing I will note though.....the speech is proper but not victorian era-ish (>:O) ...

Dammit!!! I'm second to review. *pouts* Anyways, I am a fan of your writing (as you can see since I'm following you) and this is great!!!!! That's all I will ...

I like your story but it does need to be read over. Also....I like the idea of changing the perspective but if you want both of the point of views ...

Well you certainly have impressed me once again. One thing I will note on is the dialogue because it does sound feminine and if people are reading this for the ...

I really like this first chapter but what I will note on is your dialogue. Your dialogue may irritate people because it might comes up as confusing because we don't ...

I was a little confused because I thought the whole thing will be narrated by Loki but I see. Is this Azrael a little kid or just a little younger ...

Omg.....I swear I reviewed this but oh well. It's hard to keep track and usually the ones I say I will follow are the ones I usually forget to follow ...

Hmmmm.....this is good but I think that with a few more improvements it could be a whole lot better. I know that she is a girl and girls have imaginative ...

Ooooo reminds me of the Clique series and I can feel a little bit of Gossip girl. If you're basing you story on those books, then two authors. Lisi Harrison(author ...

This actually very good but your context is a little rushed. Make sure to look it over because there are commas and periods needed in some places. I'm very interested ...

Well I would comment but Twit basically said it all. I agree. When it comes to Annabelle remarking on the dress attire for girls, I wouldn't include the way of ...