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Re: The Twin Towers
This was really good and it's good to know I'm not the only one willing to do such a story. What I will note is that it goes a little ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Road to Nowhere (Chapter Two)
This really spiked my curiosity and even though to me it was a little short, it was still good enough for it to be acceptable which is very hard to ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: And Then There Were Two: Part 1
Wow this was really good. It actually looked like a movie. It was so lively and I could see a sad setting and a hospital bed and her limp body ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Kill Her Swiftly Chapter 4 - If I was Twice as Nice (Part 2)
My only question is why is the rest of the chapter a spoiler. Is it suppose to be a spoiler or did you press spoiler by accident? But anyways, I ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Call me Alice: Part Four
This is great and I'm really enjoying reading this story but I think that you should have extended this a little bit because I'm not too sure about the ending. ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The Dream Catcher - Prologue.
Hmmm....I like it. I really like it. At first, I was a little confused because I instantly thought you got the novel and short story forum mixed up XD but ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Frozen
Omg! I hate it when I want to remember something but then I can't remember. I like things like this. This is the thing that just points out our human ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Under the Ground- Ch. 1
Wow this is really good. I am unbelievably impressed and I can't wait to go and read the rest. What I like the most about this is that you went ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Road to Nowhere (Chapter One)
I really enjoyed reading this but I think that you went a little too fast with this. When you go too fast with something, you end up missing the good ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Secrets Drowned in Blood: Prolouge
*clears throat* I am going to review....ready! :D Well I think that you got a good story here but I'm still a little confused. How did the girl suddenly appeared ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Winged Prologue
I really liked this prologue but I do think in some parts it came off as vague. I'm not very fond of prologues but I came to see that they're ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Kill Her Swiftly Chapter 4 - If I was Twice as Nice (part 1)
Allright.....I have been waiting days and days and did I mention days for you to post something and finally you do. Now..I kind of like this chapter but I still ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Street Corner Symphony ch. 2 (edited)
Honestly, I didn't think your chapter two needed much editing. I also personally think that your first chapter was extraordinary and it's better for people to think that your chapters ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2.1)
>:O God, I want to kill his lover so badly. He drives me so crazy and I feel so bad for Levi :'(. I love you, Levi. Very much *Cough ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2)
I hate it when I go read a novel and everyone has already said everything -__-. So I'm just going to go on and say it. This guy he falls ...
Aug 28, 2011