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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Moon And Stars By Alex Emery. Chapter One:

    Hi! Just your neighborhood Andy dropping in to review: But I was completely sure of one thing. I am a boy. A very powerful start to this novel. And it ...

    Sep 18, 2024
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: ******

    What a powerful piece of work. Going through tough times and going through "feeling small" is something so many people have to go through on a daily basis. And people ...

    Aug 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: [saving] becomes a burden when you can just {lose control}

    Here to review! So, first of all, I don't understand the brackets and stuff. No judgment there I was just wondering if you could explain that part to me? Secondly, ...

    Aug 27, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Elise’s story

    The chapters are really short...I do not know if that is a personal choice, or if you just did not have much to write, but super short chapters are choppy, ...

    Aug 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: you only have so much time, so you have none at all.

    Poem is pretty ~v~

    Aug 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The Candle

    This poem is beautiful I loved this piece. Keep up your good work.

    Aug 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: what happens when the pill wears off? (A Feminist Poem)

    Why did this piece hit so hard? Oml where do I start? "We are taught to hide our smiles, to put on our masks, and to hide our pain." This ...

    Aug 22, 2024


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