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Re: 6 is NEVER a crowd
It's not bad but it needs to b edited a lot. There were some spelling and grammer mistakes. Here is a version with slight corrections: “Brooklyn could you please get ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Introduction - please give feedback
I think it was very good! You get a feel for what Olivia is like straight away. Maybe you could drop hints as to what she and her Dad look ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Lovely Heart chapter 1
This is the first piece of writing I've reviewed on this site! I do see the resemblence this bears to Harry Potter- the letter, the school of msgic, the old ...
May 27, 2010