Andie

white daisies popping up over an sapphire horizon sinking back to their origin casually with the tidesThe depths rock and sway to a primal rhythmA dance that has lasted for ...

boredom+bible literacy class+access to YWS= poetry. Who knew? I really need constructive criticism on this because I really liked writing this poem. Thank you!I met a girl todayThe most peculiar ...

This is a creative writing assignment of mine. I wasn't really sure how to edit it or what to do with it. Constructive Critisism will buy you one imaginary cookie ...

This is the revised version after I considered all of your wonderful advice. I'm not sure if I should totally replace the old one though, because the original seems like ...

Hi! I hope you like the poem, pleaaaasssseee critique!! I'm not sure if the transitions in this poem are as smooth as they should be.Shadowed cornersCrumbled doorwaysMy mind never seems ...

I wrote this a long time ago and just found it, pleaaaasssseee comment and tell me how to improve it. : )On the edge of timeThe world fell into an ...