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Hey that was a very good story. I thought you could have put a lot more emotion into it. I don't know if I am right but a phrase like ...

Hi Kibble, That was good. Very Imaginative and fun to read. You must take care though to read before you submit your work. "Well, nobody, which is clearly why the ...

Hi Zenjoy, Did you avoid to put capital letters at the beginning of sentences on purpose or was it just oversight? Since you have classified your writing as Lyric, I ...

Hi Fantasy, Very good, I liked you poem, short and sweet. I however think the use of commas would enhance its expression. Anyway I'm new to the creative writing as ...