Amfliflier

Thank you guys for your comments! It's greatly appreciated. :)

In case people were wondering why I didn't have a meaning for this song: It's because I was taking a class and one of our assignments was to write a ...

Wow guys, thanks for all the feedback! Yah know, I think I might go back and possibly add/go deeper with this. And I think I might've been absentmindedly been writing ...

Hi there! Just to let you know, I'm not much of a poet, so don't be offended, but I was really confused. I read it and re-read it, but I ...

Haha, I guess that kind of makes sense. Kind of like it was sort of good, but it was lacking on the inside? I hope that's what you meant! I'll ...

That's what I was going for!

Fixed it! Not sure if it's any better, but I fixed it!

Yeah, I felt like it was missing something there, and all I could think of was missing you. xD I'll fix it when I get the chance.

Still going... :?

Oh my God! I'm so sorry! The page wouldn't load so I kept hitting the submit button! Soooooo sorry!

Really sorry!

I'm really sorry! I feel awful!

Almost there...

That was really sad! That's what you were going for, obviously, so good job! The ending was beautiful! Amazing job!

That was really cool, how it was based on a true story. I feel for you. I've never been through anything like that, but I know people who have. The ...