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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Flight 764-Chapter 2

    Hi again! I smiled at the end of this. That's always a good sign. ;) I can feel this story leading up to something big, and I can't wait to ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Flight 764-Chapter 1

    Hi there! I liked this. I think it serves as a nice intro to the rest of the story, which I'll read and review in a minute! :) Although I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Under the Starry Sky

    Hi there! I really liked this story. It was very sweet and sad at the same time. That was a really good intro in the beginning. I now know everything ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The First Tale of Lightning and Wind.

    Hi there! I liked this, but I found the names very confusing! ;) Anyways, I thought this was a cool story. I liked the description of what the boys were ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Heart Failure

    Hi there! Just to let you know, I'm not much of a poet, so don't be offended, but I was really confused. I read it and re-read it, but I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Nonchlant

    Hi there! I really liked this song. About halfway through it I realized I was singing it in my head, and it sounded like a moderately slow pop song. I ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ballon

    Hi there! Okay, just to get this out of the way: I really hope you continue this, because the ending was a cliffhanger. I liked how the concept of this ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Courage

    This was really sweet. I liked the description of her and just basically the scenario in the very beginning. It was really detailed and written in a cool way. Although ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: a touching story

    I loved this, until the very end. Was this a chain email? xD I'm sorry, but you could've at least gotten rid of that last part about "sending it to ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter One

    Awww, I was looking forward to reading this. :( If it's of any help, and since it's basically the only words on here, the title was what drew me in. ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You don't understand

    Hi there! I really liked this song. When I was reading the chorus the first time through, I found myself hearing this as a pop song. Yeah, I know. ;) ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Shadows

    Wow, that was a really cool ending. I don't know what it was about this, but it seemed really artistic to me. Although I have to say, the title was ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Fakebook

    This sounded exactly like one of the internet safety lectures we occasionally get at school. I lost interest about half-way through, but I managed to make it to the end. ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Soul Collector- 4

    Oh my gosh! The last sentence that Keith said just about broke my heart! "Am I like my daddy?" Keith is so innocent, and I'm on the verge of tears ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Soul Collector- 3

    Wow. The ending of this piece was so powerful and descriptive. Seriously, this story keeps getting better and better! I'm glad that Nora and Alec get to finally meet. I've ...

    May 1, 2011


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