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Re: Flight 764-Chapter 2
Hi again! I smiled at the end of this. That's always a good sign. ;) I can feel this story leading up to something big, and I can't wait to ...
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Re: Flight 764-Chapter 1
Hi there! I liked this. I think it serves as a nice intro to the rest of the story, which I'll read and review in a minute! :) Although I ...
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Re: Under the Starry Sky
Hi there! I really liked this story. It was very sweet and sad at the same time. That was a really good intro in the beginning. I now know everything ...
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Re: The First Tale of Lightning and Wind.
Hi there! I liked this, but I found the names very confusing! ;) Anyways, I thought this was a cool story. I liked the description of what the boys were ...
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Re: Heart Failure
Hi there! Just to let you know, I'm not much of a poet, so don't be offended, but I was really confused. I read it and re-read it, but I ...
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Re: Nonchlant
Hi there! I really liked this song. About halfway through it I realized I was singing it in my head, and it sounded like a moderately slow pop song. I ...
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Re: Ballon
Hi there! Okay, just to get this out of the way: I really hope you continue this, because the ending was a cliffhanger. I liked how the concept of this ...
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Re: Courage
This was really sweet. I liked the description of her and just basically the scenario in the very beginning. It was really detailed and written in a cool way. Although ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: a touching story
I loved this, until the very end. Was this a chain email? xD I'm sorry, but you could've at least gotten rid of that last part about "sending it to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One
Awww, I was looking forward to reading this. :( If it's of any help, and since it's basically the only words on here, the title was what drew me in. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: You don't understand
Hi there! I really liked this song. When I was reading the chorus the first time through, I found myself hearing this as a pop song. Yeah, I know. ;) ...
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Re: Shadows
Wow, that was a really cool ending. I don't know what it was about this, but it seemed really artistic to me. Although I have to say, the title was ...
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Re: Fakebook
This sounded exactly like one of the internet safety lectures we occasionally get at school. I lost interest about half-way through, but I managed to make it to the end. ...
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Re: The Soul Collector- 4
Oh my gosh! The last sentence that Keith said just about broke my heart! "Am I like my daddy?" Keith is so innocent, and I'm on the verge of tears ...
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Re: The Soul Collector- 3
Wow. The ending of this piece was so powerful and descriptive. Seriously, this story keeps getting better and better! I'm glad that Nora and Alec get to finally meet. I've ...
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