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AmeliaCogin

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A girl with a song

    Hi! I'm Amelia and I'm going to give your piece a quick review! This poem was very well-written. It contained some lovely imagery. It flowed well, and read smoothly. I ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dark Obsession: Chapter one: COMPLETE

    Hey Soulkana! I'm here to review as promised! I haven't reviewed at all lately, so I best get stared again. Let's make it an epic! Okay - this was, on ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Silence of Laughter

    Hiya Jessa! How are you? We haven't chatted in ages! Is everything going Okay? Anyway, down to my review. Bear with me: I haven't really reviewed much lately, so I ...

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Advertising on the Offense

    Hi Alzora - I'm here to review as promised! Bear with me - I'm a little rusty! I haven't seem to have written a review in absolutely ages! Right: down ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Choices - The Preface

    Ooh...I'm hooked already! I'll get to a review in a few moments; pleasantries first! WELCOME, Bell! Nice to see you're already posting your work! You're just going to love it ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue for Untitled Novel

    Hello, and, first of all, Welcome! * shakes hands * I'm Amelia, otherwise know as Am or Alia. Allow me to begin my saying how much I enjoyed this piece. ...

    Jul 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Heima

    Hello! This piece was fabulous. Sincerely: it was pure brilliance. You dazzled your reader with flowery prose, then turned to a little more of a simplistic style to make an ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Rosemary - Prologue

    Hello Joyce! I don't think I've ever reviewed a piece of your work before and I'm looking forward to it! Right, so, I'll first adress your question in the spoiler. ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The World is Spinning in Deep Effect

    Hello and Welcome to Young Writers Society! * Shakes hands - "I'm Alia" *. It's great to see that you're posting already! Have fun here and keep these pieces coming! ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: .

    Hello Rosey. I promised you a review and so here I am! The thing that drew me to this piece was the whole subject matter - I am absolutely facinated ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Burning

    Hello Veritas! Thank you for your review of my work: "imperceptable" - It was very much appreciated. Now, I'm here to return the favour. I'll break my review up into ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas

    Hello Rabbit! I'm back as promised and ready to review! I'll go easy on you *cracks knuckles* lol...I'm not that bad, trust me! Anyway, on to the 1st chapter of ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Avenue Sisters- Prologue

    Hello. My name is Amelia - you can call me what you like, though: I get A, Am or Alia - take your pick! I'll be revieiwing your work today! ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Math...mwahahahah

    This poem is so great. I think all we Literacy-lovers on YWS can relate to this poem ( me inparticular - I scraped a C in my maths GCSE). I ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Revenge

    I love it! This is fantastic - you wrote it in such a way as to make the unrealistic humerous, even, to make it realistic! I had a giggle on ...

    Jun 28, 2011


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain