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Re: A girl with a song
Hi! I'm Amelia and I'm going to give your piece a quick review! This poem was very well-written. It contained some lovely imagery. It flowed well, and read smoothly. I ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Dark Obsession: Chapter one: COMPLETE
Hey Soulkana! I'm here to review as promised! I haven't reviewed at all lately, so I best get stared again. Let's make it an epic! Okay - this was, on ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Silence of Laughter
Hiya Jessa! How are you? We haven't chatted in ages! Is everything going Okay? Anyway, down to my review. Bear with me: I haven't really reviewed much lately, so I ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Advertising on the Offense
Hi Alzora - I'm here to review as promised! Bear with me - I'm a little rusty! I haven't seem to have written a review in absolutely ages! Right: down ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Choices - The Preface
Ooh...I'm hooked already! I'll get to a review in a few moments; pleasantries first! WELCOME, Bell! Nice to see you're already posting your work! You're just going to love it ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Prologue for Untitled Novel
Hello, and, first of all, Welcome! * shakes hands * I'm Amelia, otherwise know as Am or Alia. Allow me to begin my saying how much I enjoyed this piece. ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Heima
Hello! This piece was fabulous. Sincerely: it was pure brilliance. You dazzled your reader with flowery prose, then turned to a little more of a simplistic style to make an ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Rosemary - Prologue
Hello Joyce! I don't think I've ever reviewed a piece of your work before and I'm looking forward to it! Right, so, I'll first adress your question in the spoiler. ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: The World is Spinning in Deep Effect
Hello and Welcome to Young Writers Society! * Shakes hands - "I'm Alia" *. It's great to see that you're posting already! Have fun here and keep these pieces coming! ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: .
Hello Rosey. I promised you a review and so here I am! The thing that drew me to this piece was the whole subject matter - I am absolutely facinated ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Burning
Hello Veritas! Thank you for your review of my work: "imperceptable" - It was very much appreciated. Now, I'm here to return the favour. I'll break my review up into ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas
Hello Rabbit! I'm back as promised and ready to review! I'll go easy on you *cracks knuckles* lol...I'm not that bad, trust me! Anyway, on to the 1st chapter of ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: The Avenue Sisters- Prologue
Hello. My name is Amelia - you can call me what you like, though: I get A, Am or Alia - take your pick! I'll be revieiwing your work today! ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Math...mwahahahah
This poem is so great. I think all we Literacy-lovers on YWS can relate to this poem ( me inparticular - I scraped a C in my maths GCSE). I ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Revenge
I love it! This is fantastic - you wrote it in such a way as to make the unrealistic humerous, even, to make it realistic! I had a giggle on ...
Jun 28, 2011
