AmeliaCogin

Hi, this was short and sweet, quite charming too. A few of the sentences need to be rewritten just to make the piece flow a little bit more smoothly. Thanks! ...

Hi, I loved this story. Very imaginative! Your writing flows really well. There were a few things I found confusing, but I'm not picking them out because other reviews have ...

This story is just too cool! I think sometimes it great to push the brilliant yet depressing stories aside and read a quirky, ludicrously cheerful piece. I think, though, it ...

Hi there, I enjoyed this piece, it was quite imaginative. Your writing could be made a little more dramatic and could have more impact if the sentences were a little ...

I loved this story so much. Very original and quite moving. I always try and anticipate where a story is going, but with 'pieces of time', I couldn't tell. That's ...

Cute and very imaginative. It like the whole fairytale concept - ie, "once upon a time". A few minor mistakes but very clever and unique. I liked it a lot! ...

I liked this. Very moving. Unique, too, I suppose. I've never thought of writing in the form of a letter as you obviously have. It's quite original. Although there were ...