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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Astray

    September... I was lost… like a leaf feels Right, you can personify this without using 'like a leaf feels' because realistically - leaves don't have feelings so we'll never know. ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love Song

    Prologue I stared into his ocean blue eyes, the a pair unlike any on earth. I loved his eyes, they were the picture of gorgeous. You could walk around, and ...

    Nov 27, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Cutting Death

    I started this story and have not finished it yet. Tell me what you think about it so far. Thanks The blood whose blood? spilled into the monster’s mouth. The ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The first page of a story.

    This is one of the first pieces i've wrote..Bit sci-fi.. i didnt know where it was leading so i stopped. I tried to Do it from a male point of ...

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: NE; 'The Glory Poem'

    Infinite bite and trialed trialled fights, bayonettes bayonets not short from sight. The sky bleached red like the fiery pitts pits of hell. The bombs like my foot, not so ...

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Nothing Beats A Water Fall

    First of all, I was really intrigued by the title of your piece and enjoyed reading it! There are a few little things I picked up on though so I'll ...

    Nov 24, 2009


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