AmatuerWritings

Wow, just wow. The suspense is real in this one! You can see it with the first few words! The way you give a psychotic feel, the actions he takes, ...

Is there an award I can give you myself from this? Though short, sweet, and simple, it gives you a suspenseful and just plain wonderful feeling. I especially love, love, ...

Hey! This is actually pretty cool! Though short, and feeling part of a chapter not a whole one to me, this had a lot of different aspects in it. You ...

Amazing, absolutely 100% amazing! I absolutely loved this! It is an amazing story! I don't know if I will ever trust a clock again, it'll bring me back here and ...

This was just lovely! I really hope that this becomes a published work and I can get the whole book to read! I believe that this will be a wonderful ...