AmandaRose

Awww thank you so much!

Thank you! Yes, my old grammar checker got rid of their free version and I don't want to pay so I'm still in the process of finding another one that ...

Dialogue is something that used to give me a lot of trouble, so I truly appreciate hearing that my hard work has paid off in this area! Since this is ...

I'll admit, it does run little fast, but because of where the story needs to end up, it sort of needs to run fast... I have done some line by ...

@sophiesangel Thank you!

I've gone through and edited some of that out, if you care to take a look. Thanks again for the points, now that I finally had some time to sit ...

Excuse me?

This is the newest version of the first two chapters... I have nine in all and I'll try to publish them in two chapter installments. It is definitely still in ...

I tried posting it all at once but then the word limit got me😆 So I figured I'd do it by halves and then I ran out of credits and ...