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Re: One Single Hate, Chapter 1
Very well written... Though, I must agree with what the othrs suggest. Also, you use the wrong tense of catches in this sentence. : A lose thread on her shirt ...
May 25, 2005
Very well written... Though, I must agree with what the othrs suggest. Also, you use the wrong tense of catches in this sentence. : A lose thread on her shirt ...
May 25, 2005
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