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AmairaRose

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: One Single Hate, Chapter 1

    Very well written... Though, I must agree with what the othrs suggest. Also, you use the wrong tense of catches in this sentence. : A lose thread on her shirt ...

    May 25, 2005


Keep your face always toward the sunshine - and the shadows will fall beyond you.
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