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Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3
I like the way this story is going. It has a very different, but yet very relevant, plotline. I want to know how the mother found out, how the father ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Hey Babycakes
Whoa, I did not expect the girl to be a vampire. I knew something was up, but not that. I would have liked to have seen a bit of a ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Understanding
Nice job Sam! The only thing I noticed was that everything moved incredibly fast, and when her mother first started to speak it was a bit awkward but you were ...
Oct 19, 2008
