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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: There's Something About Jerry

    I saw Sarah putting up a new display of Meg Cabot books. When she saw me she smiled , she had long blonde hair and bright blue eyes. This is ...

    Feb 17, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: There's Something About Jerry

    I work the hardest in this place and yet I see not even a little raise…after two years! Oh the injustice of working at a mall! :roll: I'm sorry, I ...

    Feb 17, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: There's Something About Jerry

    Because who these days can control a binge disorder? And the sad thing is , she doesn’t need those girls. We are , well we weren’t nerds…we were people doing ...

    Feb 17, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Ghostly Aficionado chp 1

    Not too much to criticize here. Your description in the story is a little weak...may I suggest looking through thesaruses or works from the Romanticism era to see some good ...

    Feb 15, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: 1. The Beginning (Fixed up a bit)

    :shock: Oh lord she's back, back I tell you! Alright, enough with the stupid stuff. I know I've read this at school but I am quite sure that I had ...

    Feb 14, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Smile

    How can one simple upper turning of the lips completely disarm me? I do believe this is may favorite part of the entire story. The description in just this line ...

    Feb 14, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: No Name # 1

    Just thought I should point out a quick spelling error to you. It's a small one and probably just a key-stroke mistake. “Well no big deal I suppose, we’ll just ...

    Feb 14, 2008


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