Alora

Love the originality! I've never written poetry but I could easily relate to that line; 'A kind which gushes, not from a well wielded pen. but from a crazy heart ...

Thanks so much for your review! Those are good suggestions and it's great to hear the questions it provoked (I had wondered if I was being too vague with the ...

Thanks so much for your review, I really appreciate it! Definitely, you will learn the significance of this prologue as the story progresses. I thought about leaving this scene as ...

Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! It's great to hear your impressions so I know which parts are strong and which need rework. Thanks also ...

Thanks so much for your review! I will certainly take your advice and give more input to these characters (I felt like I'd somewhat neglected them). I completely understand the ...

Thanks for your welcome and review! I%u2019m thrilled to hear the storyline passed your expectations. I will take your suggestions and put in more description to set the scene; both ...