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Hmm, I think I must apologize for posting such an awful read! xP I was simply needing to write somehthing, due to having writers block in regards to the novel ...

You're very welcome, it was a pleasure to read! Well it would be very helpful if you could check out my novel; "Part of the Night" and give me your ...

So I LOVE the direction that this story is heading! The plot is fantastic and you should tell me as soon as you've posted more! :D

Heehee! xD Thank's for your enthusiasm! As soon as I post some more I'll letcha know! :D

Hey! I really enjoyed this piece and found it very humorous! :) I won't bother with grammatical errors... Keep up the good work! ~Ally~

Thank you for taking your time to review this! Well she can hold fire because it's and fantasy novel and that's an element she can control! Sorry if the paragraphs ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to review this! :D Okay I would like to start off by apologizing for my work not being spaced properly, this is ...

Okay... I'm sorry if it seems that I didn't bother to take the time and "separate my dialogue," for you see this is simply something I'm writing on my computer ...

Thank you so much for taking your time to review this! Well as far as the speech marks go whenever Orland (Eveline's instinct) is talking to her, he's speaking to ...

Thank you everyone! With the length of this "Chapter" I'm not exactly sure how long the chapter will actually end up being, I was originally writing this on my computer ...