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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: The Haunting

    Hello there! Ally here for your requested review! :D I would like to start by saying that I agree with everyone else that told you how amazing this piece was. ...

    Aug 4, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Letters To My Sister.

    Hello! It's Ally, here for more requested reviews! :D Alright, this is certainly a different genre from some of your other works so I'd like to congratulate you on being ...

    Aug 4, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Obsessed

    Hey there, Ally here for the review you requested! I would like to begin by saying that I have no idea why on Earth you would ever think that any ...

    Aug 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: This is not the name of the story (chapter one)

    Hello there! I would like to apologize in advance for this not being the most thorough review in the world. :P However your writing stlye blew me away so I ...

    Jul 31, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Runaway - Chapter One

    Hello there! This is most likely just going to turn into a "fluff review," but oh well! You deserve it! Or in other words I loved this! While I was ...

    Apr 23, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Sled Eating Bush

    I think I owe you an apology for taking so long to finally review this, I truly feel awful for not mkaing time to get on YWS and give you ...

    Apr 23, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Jada: Eternal Hunter of Lost Souls Ch 1

    Hey there! AllyGrLxOx here to review! This was epic-ly awesome! I loved it and can honestly say that I could see myself reading this as an actual book. That's how ...

    Jan 29, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: A Journey - Part 1: Memory ~~(Chapter 1)~~

    Hey there! AllyGrLxOx here to review! I'll begin by saying that this was very well written and truly was able to hold my interest throughout the whole passage! However I ...

    Jan 29, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Forget the World~1

    Hey there Tabby! It's Ally here to review as requested! Let me just say that I found this very enjoyable and easy to read! The flow was very smooth, and ...

    Jan 23, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General
    Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter One

    Hey there, it's AllyGrLxOx here to review as requested! I don't have alot of nitpicks! Only a few that I think could use some editing! xD This whole piece was ...

    Jan 23, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Trouble on the Homefront - Chapter One

    Hello there, Ally here to review! I haven't read the prologue so this review will be fully based upon chapter one! This has a very interesting take on a "communist ...

    Jan 8, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: One thing

    Hey there, AllyGrLxOx here to review! I'll begin by saying that if I come off as harsh I truly am not trying to, I'm just trying to help you and ...

    Jan 5, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Power of Pop Secret

    Please write more! I'm begging you! *Gets down on hands and knees* Please, please, please, write more! In Erik or Anna's POV, either works because both are filled with emotion ...

    Jan 4, 2011


  • Hello there, AllyGrLxOx here to review as requested! :D In three short words I will summarize my overall feelings, I loved it! The way you ended this literally had me ...

    Jan 4, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: Caleb's story, chapter three

    Hey there, AllyGrLxOx here to review as requested! Sorry it took me a couple days to post the review! :P I'm going to be a tad nitpicky with some things ...

    Jan 3, 2011


On some days, my will to write disappears faster than a donut at a police station.
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