AllieMeadows

Hey thanks fot commenting I'm working on Chapter 3 I'll post it soon

wow! I really didn't expect that. I expected that Carol really did like Lucas. I love the twists and the unexpected. You really need to kepp writing. You're amazingly talented!!!!

OMG I love tis story. The suprise twist comes a little fast and I kinda got lost in it but its still really good. You need to write more and ...

this is really good but you need to be more desriptive. I have a hard time with it too ,but more description makes it a lot better. Don't get me ...

ok that story was really good. I wish I could write that well. I did keep wondering why she hates him. Maybe its in the next chapter. Well I'll read ...

Here is an edited version of Chapter 1. It's not perfect but its better. Preface Sometimes you just know when you’re in love. It’s hard to explain how you know. ...

hey everyone thank so much for the pointers so far. I've corrected my grammer and took in some of ya'lls points. I'm gonna post the edited version and to theotherone ...