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Re: Fate - Chapter 2: Flooding Tears
This chapter was really good. I love the emition behind it. I love the lost and heartbroken feeling I got when I read it. I think you could have combined ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Fate - Chapter 1: Broken Glass
Ok I really loved this chapter. It caught my attention and made me want to read more. You have very good descriptive language something I struggle with ao I envy ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(3)
Ok I really like your story. The description of places and events are better with less emotional description it makes it more understandable. I still got a little confused. The ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(2)
Ok not to be harsh but this chapter seemed very long. It was kind of hard to follow and not as believable. It sounds as if a girl is narrating ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(1)
Ok I really like this story. I was a little confused in the beginning but as the story progressed I understood it better. I think the beginning is very fitting ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Know I'm Here(Prologue)
Ok I really like your prologue. It makes me want to read the rest of your story. I can't wait ti finish this so I can go read the rest. ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one
I like your story. Its pretty good but really cliche. It kinda makes you see the Hollywood life which I have no experience with so I wouldn't really know. This ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Untitled Chapter 2
Ok I really like your story but you need some depth. Why does Addy love Jersey boys? How does the rest f her day go? What other classes does she ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Untitled chapter 1
Ok I really liked this chapter although I have to agree that it is a little choppy. I love how this story Katie normil and down to earth. I am ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 8 (part 1)
Omg why do you post in parts? You drive me insane. I just want to know what happens. I love your story and how there is some magic but not ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Ok really awesome chapter! It made me so mad when I got to the end. I am in love with your story. Keep writing and making everyone fall in love ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 6
Ik its official. I'm in love with your story. It has everthing that I love in storys. I love the emotion but also the suspense. I love how you make ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Him *6*
Hey your story Katie really coming along really well. I am in love with it. Keep writing! I love how you are developing your characters and giving them substance. You ...
Jan 11, 2011