Alliaaryn5665

Hello, Darling, seems like a story to me. One thing: Pushing and wanting-- The opposite of Want and wanting. Wanting is not the opposite of wanting. Farewell, -A.

Hello, This is midly confusing. I have no idea whatsoever as to what is going on. I did enjoy it though. Farwell, -A.

Hi, Few grammatical errors. Just read this over, you'll see them. You are my new best friend. Farewell, -A.

Bonsoir, Holy Llamas on fire! Farewell, -A.

Hello, First things first, I love all of the poem, honestly. I just have one issue and that's the last line. It BOMBS your poem. It's like, 'I'm so pretty ...

Howdy, SO close, yet so far. Not quite understandable. Yet simple. Hmm, makes you think. Maybe too much? I don't know, honestly. I read it a few times, and I ...

Howdy, Wanna know what's super funny? I am a member of the actual PETA. I cracked up; aka you crackled me up! I loved this so much, especially the ending. ...

Howdy, I love you for writing this. Haha, is that weird? Oh well. Hurry! Farewell, -A.

Any suggestions on how to clear it up?

Howdy, Please hurry. Love, A.

I didn't breathe when I read this.

Hi, Oh my goodness, I loved this! While it wasn't suspenseful or creepy, it was psychological. I liked this a lot. I wish you would keep going. There were a ...

Hi, There were some typos! But that's okay! Good job! Farewell, A.

Hi, Sorry, but what the hell is this. I could barely understand this, let alone want to. You didn't capture my attention. You might have if everything was spelled out. ...

Hi, While it didn't give me too many questions, it did pull me in. Good job, I loved it. Farewell, A.