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Re: Gentle Kiss
Hi, Congradulations! For the first time outside of school, that was quite impressive! You should continue writting. This stanza: "Please tell me I'm the only one Or else my heart ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Options chapter 2:Corner Alley
Hi, Grammar alert! Have you forgetten the rules of English? I do that sometimes too. There are some serious spelling errors! You spelled dying wrong and a few other things ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Options
Hi, First thing's first! Uhm, you forgot some words, but, hey, it happens. Kind of choppy to me but that's just me. I think it was really good. Though, I ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Diaries of a Dead Girl Prelude
Hi, Personally, I think you should have played a little more into it. I started reading and was automatically confused. Who's he? What is a "Freaker"? What are you? How ...
Jun 17, 2011