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Re: The long short story
Hola Angels. The bright light of the day began to fade away and time became quick. I don't get as to how time can become quick when the bright light ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Online Intruder
Hola JordanEmert. I'll be your reviewer for today. "Hey Check out this site." Derrik said reaching across the bus seat putting a slip of paper into Samantha's hand. Comma after ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: The Mad Hatter's Tea Party
Hola chichi. “Who goes there?” boomed a scratchy voice from somewhere ahead. I think boom and scratchy sort of contradicts. I think nixing 'scratchy' would work better. There was no ...
Dec 29, 2008
