Aliicide

Your story starts off just like any ordinary one, introducing us to the character. You’re telling us a bit of his history and a bit of his present. Here, I ...

That’s an interesting story you’ve got here! I like the way you begin it, letting us know what lead to the fight and how the character felt. I also like ...

This is part of what I've been thinking over the past few years. I like that you managed to put into words such thoughts. I was and am unable to ...