AliceWonderland

Yeah, I know it's long, but points aren't easy to get for me. I'm not trying to do reviews just for the points, but to actually see if I can ...

Yeah, I haven't corrected much on it, so I know it's confusing at some parts. I'm slowly getting to correcting them though. The blue words are some malware stuff that ...

Well, you know how I mentioned the song "Alice" in the story? This was back during the first half of the second chapter. The title is talking about that song. ...

Thanks. I don't know about the song because on my computer and quite a few others say novel/chapter? Don't mean to offend, but has you computer been not accepting going ...

I figure it's fiction, but it's so unusual. It's makes the idea intriguing and interesting.

Thanks! I'll make sure to keep it going.

Actually, I've finished the whole novel, but before I put most of the other on, I want to put some 15 year old knowledge to the year old first draft. ...

Thanks, I can't wait for you to read the next chapter!

My gosh, you are just the type of person I've been looking for. You get out all the nit picky stuff that I like. Oh, and don't worry about Forseti, ...

Please help me all you can, don't hold back!

Thanks so much for telling me! I like it when people tell me what needs to be changed without holding back. However, I don't know where it changes abruptly, could ...