AliceRose

Excellent prolouge!! I love the whole aspect of the narrorator not thinking that he is everything, but knowing it. It really puts an almost subtle notion to the fact that ...

I really enjoyed Lock and Key. I love Sarah Dessen.

I loved it! It's just so original! The thought is hilarious. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that, it was great, Keep up the good work :)

Oh, my goodness, that was awesome!! You had me from that first sentance :)

Wow. That was pretty good, but kind of depressing. Personally, I like the longer stanzas. My mind can't always go with the really short lines. I have short attention span. ...

WOW!! I really liked it! I love this kind of thing anyway, but you write it really well. I would like to know how they look though, but keep it ...