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Re: Life, Love, and Chocolate (Ch. 1)
I thought that this was really good :) I really liked how much detail you went into about Clay, although I would like to know a tad bit more about ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: I'll Ruin Her
Whoa :shock: . I did NOT see that one coming. Her mother? Damn, that sucks. If it's yours, I'm really sorry that something like that happened to you. No one ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: I am Mentally Ill
WOW!! I thought that that was excellent!! I really like how you "tried" to explain how her hair was, how you said that it was something you had to see ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3
OH MY GODDNESS!!! I really like this story so far, and usually I'm not the kind of girl who goes for that kind of thing. I really like the way ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: First Chapter of My Romantic Comedy
I was not going to be able to write for a while for I was sick. I would write it, either, "because I was sick", or "for a while, for ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: The Little Girl in the Basement
When we first got to the castle a month ago, I immediately fed Pink the most extravagant dinner the poor thing probably had. If I had written that, I would've ...
Apr 15, 2009