AliceFairfield

Wenton sounds like a real name to me. Obviously, Wenton thinks Cody is annoying, but I think the boy's really cute. This first chapter was definitely interesting. It caught my ...

I'm not a good reviewer, but I'll try my best^^ I'd love to see your review/comments as well

Chapter 3

This is amazing. Your writing style has no flaws, as far as I can tell. And this chapter is honestly great as it is now. No need to edit anything.

Sorry I'm not a great reviewer. EverLight, WinnyWriter and a lot of other users give more detailed reviews...

Ok, then. I guessed wrong~

That's good

@LZPianoGirl (I forgot to add this...)

Same to you, thanks for your review^^ If Ch. 4 was fun, feel free to read the previous chapters (of course, you don't have to leave any reviews for them). ...

(Stay awake Kyre!) I mean- this is a suspenseful chapter. The "stranger that is as familiar as a friend" line was the one I liked best^^

Here I am, noticing the cyan color of the text only after I see the wiki link...This poem is very insightful. It feels almost like academic prose, due to the ...

This chapter is fairly short, so there's not too much to edit. If I had to make a suggestion, maybe you could replace "people" with another word, as it makes ...

What's going to happen to Ashe...? (eagerly awaits the next chapter)

Like I said, you're great. No need for you to worry about "imperfections" at all.

My novel "Sleepless" is heavily based on anime (and light novels), if I haven't told you this before. Please have a look at it if you're interested (you don't need ...