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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No Easy Love

    Hi Stargazer! The stars are great tonight, so I'll give a Kudos Revue! So I read this piece 'No Easy Love', and I sensed that it was a worthwhile topic ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Letting off steam...

    Hi Emily! This is Al, not for a review, but to let out my steam too! Thank you, dear! A discussion about letting off steam! At first, when I saw ...

    Jan 6, 2012
  • Script » General, General Re: The Next Arthur (for screen)- Prologue

    Hi Mary, Alfred here for a Quick Critique! I really love reading fantasy, and this is my first time reviewing one, since, well, most scripts I read are romance. So ...

    Jan 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: these are a few of my favourite things~

    Good day, Lexis! Al here, to say that I have a lot of favorite things. And one of them is giving a Quick Critique! So now, let me give you ...

    Jan 4, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In Tune with Reality

    Hi, this is Al for a Kudos Revue! Let's both get in tune with reality! So, if I am right, this here piece is all about learning from past love ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Death

    It got me thinking if I would die soon; so just to be sure, I would already comment on your poem, 'Death', so that when I die, all my goals ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Esmeralda

    Good day, Vicky. Who IS Esmeralda? Anyway, this is Alfred giving a Kudos Revue. I think your poem is really fantastic. I really love how you told the story because ...

    Dec 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fangirl Minds

    Hi Mirasol, so let me hit you with a Quick Critique! I wonder why there are lesser and lesser people giving reviews everyday. Maybe because of the lack of pointing ...

    Dec 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Before I Die

    Before I die, let me give you a Quick Critique! It has been a while since I give a review, so please don't mind the topsy-turvy effects! Concept & Theme ...

    Dec 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Clair and the Stone Statues

    Hi Scarlett Winters! Here bbbrrrrr I am for a bbrrrrrr Quick Critique! (Why did it turn so cold?!) So, I really love history! The words, the dates, the people...oh, okay, ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Love turned to hate

    Oh, I simply LOVE HATE! Al here for a lovely but hateful Quick Critique! I think you did the poem very artistically because you combined different figurative speeches. You first ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Painted Crow

    Wow! A change of heart, huh? I can see that from the cold words you put in the "White Crow", you added these colorful and creative words which made the ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Micheal Crichton's Jurassic Park

    Hiya! This is Alfred, your Quick Critique! It's quite weird to give a revue about another review, so I'll just give my impression to your work! I've watched Jurassic Park ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: F*** You Inspiration

    F*ck you inspiration! Because you inspired me to write this Quick Critique! Al, here, ready Freddy! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D The points given in theme shows ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A "J" for "Joy"

    Hi, this is "A" for Al, giving a Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D I just don't understand it but, even though your poem is quite ...

    Dec 19, 2011


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