Aley

Hi, I'm here to review in place of someone because they asked me to. First thing first, I'd like to say your avi is adorable, and I like what you ...

Hey Emerald~ Aley here to finally get this out of the green room. I like this poem better than "focaliser" because you don't feel like you're very trapped in what ...

Hello Emerald~ I think you created an interesting juxtaposition between the two stanzas of this poem with the first one being the female speaker in first person, and the second ...

Hello! Aley here. I think that your style of song is something between pop and rock? Well, welcome to YWS! To start out I'll show you the typical style of ...

Hey there, Aley here. So you're a rhymer huh? I've got a great article that you can read about what one YWSer thinks about what makes good and bad rhymes. ...

Hey Grieves, Aley here. To start out I'd like to say that I don't quite understand capitalizing His, but it is an interesting syntactical choice that seems to juxtapose this ...

Hey Magpie, It's been a while I think since I've reviewed one of your poems, and this happens to be in the green room, so here it goes. Being relaxed ...

Hello! So I hear you're curious about well boy do I have a place for you XD. Alright, down to business. I like that you didn't do the classical love ...

Aley here! I'm going to cut right to the chase since this poem doesn't beat around the bush either. The "And" in the fourth line is breaking up the sentence ...

Hey Anna

Hello! So first of all I'd like to say that I think you did a good job including a lot of allusions in this piece with how you talk about ...

Hey! Aley here. I would like to say that you definitely have a way with words. I like how you work in internal rhyme as well as the end rhyme. ...

Hello~ Aley here. This was really easy to read, which is great because I get bored with reading things that are hard to read. I really love how you introduced ...

Hey! So I haven't read chapter 1 all the way, but I did skim it. This looks like a good candidate for Adopt A Novel honestly. I'd like to say ...

Hi Pinkie, so I reviewed one of your other characters. I actually find this kind of funny because not only can you see this as writing as a character, but ...