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Hey Lum, Nice to see a poem from you that I get to review

Hey Stranger. I can see why this got so many likes. I really think that you've got a knack for stringing adjectives together. I will say however, that if you ...

Hey Atsmai, Nice to see you're writing! Welcome to Review Day where everyone tears apart everything. I like how you're trying to play off of the idea that there really ...

Hi Cynder! So I like what you're trying to do here. I like the circular nature of the day where your speaker actually feels like what everyone says they should ...

Hey Pan, I really like how you're going about getting some humor in the poem along with creating a story around the poem as well. That's nicely done. If a ...

Hey LadySpark! Long time no review. That's changing now. So I really liked how you started this poem out diving directly into a simile. The voice in this poem is ...

Hello again! So you just wrote this. I think this is probably a little overdone. I really like how you use "chain wallet" to indicate the sort of surfer generation ...

Uh, that was strange. What did I just read again? You did a good job with this I think I'm going to have to revoke your card of "I'm not ...

Hah, nice. This is going to be easy to review. I have a couple more things to review before I hit 50 WOOT! So I've totally written this poem before. ...

Hello! I like the approach you have to showing something about the sea rather than telling us directly. I think that really works well in a lot of cases and ...

Hello Artemis, You did a really good job capturing the image you were trying to portray. I feel like if I googled monk on fire, I'd be able to actually ...

Hey, So we actually haven't met before I don't think. Because of that I'm going to drop off some helpful links to things in our knowledge base here on YWS ...

Hey! You did a good job with this. I like how you're working with the seasons to create a feel for the place and setting, but after that, you let ...

Hey Dropout, Like I said, I'm just going through your poems to see what you've got up. Alright, so this review is just going to be a basic thing because ...

Hey Dropout, Here for another review! First off I'd like to say that this poem really shows itself off well. You did a really good job with the style of ...