Alexey

Hello, I enjoyed the story, I think it has some potential to say the least. I would definitely suppose that the addition of the first chapter would give it a ...

Very nice piece, taken as a whole. I feel that you have done very well in communicating your thoughts and feelings in written words, and that is an accomplishment in ...

Wow, very nice story. I am coming in kind of in the middle of it, so that might put me at a bit of a "bias" already. But anyway, here ...