AlexaBWill

Thank you for pointing out the part where I did that! I hadn't even noticed. Thank you for your feedback.

Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback and am glad you like it!

I feel so called out right now

I think what happened surrounding Tonuauc's death felt a little rushed and incomplete, to be honest, but his actual death felt very purposeful and complete if that makes sense.

I just reviewed the preceding chapter, so I was so excited to see this one in the green room, too! Once again, I can’t stress enough how much I love ...

I actually didn't mind the gory part of the description. I don't know if I put this in my original review, but the part saying "With a sudden pull, the ...

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Good morning! I saw that this work has been in the Green Room with no reviews for a while now, so let's remedy that. First of all, let me just ...

Hello! Thank you so much for the feedback, and I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the story. I actually agree with you on that info-dumpy line. I wasn%u2019t actually trying to convey ...

Thank you for the feedback! I intentionally used the word 'nanny' to create tension because I feel like most people would probably be more concerned about a human babysitter than ...

I'm so happy you enjoyed it! The second part is probably coming soon, I just have to edit it! I, too, enjoy these times (although I don't like the fact ...