AlexaBWill

I was so intrigued by Pt. 4 that I had to keep reading, and boy, am I glad I did. This finale is extremely touching. All of the descriptions in ...

Okay, so you might recognize me. I just reviewed another section of Delta, and let me just say, the difference between this chapter and that is night and day. The ...

Hey, there! Starting off, there are a few odd things as far as syntax and grammar, but overall, I think it's a good opening. Nothing is overwritten, the descriptions make ...

Hey! I enjoyed reading your work, and I think you're doing a great job. I'm just going to go through your story chronologically with the thoughts I had as I ...

Let me just start off by saying: your descriptions are absolutely enchanting. That opening sequence was amazing and ethereal, and the way you wrote it had a lot of power. ...

I just reviewed the preceding chapter, so I was so excited to see this one in the green room, too! Once again, I can’t stress enough how much I love ...

Good morning and happy Review Day! Let's get this work out of the Green Room. :) First of all, I think you're doing a great job, and I enjoyed reading ...

Good morning! I saw that this work has been in the Green Room with no reviews for a while now, so let's remedy that. First of all, let me just ...

Good morning! I think this chapter was really good! I just want to start out this review with a disclaimer that I have not had the chance to read the ...

Good morning! As a history lover, I was really excited when I saw this piece in the Green Room. One question I have right off the bat is whether those ...

I haven't read your book leading up to this point, but I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I can't believe there aren't any reviews on it yet! I can tell that ...

Great poem! It had really great flow, and the rhyming scheme was on-point. The poem itself was very touching, especially the "Teri bahon mein mujhe mil gayi." Overall, I think ...

Good poem! It certainly is very personal and emotional, which is conveyed well in how transparent the writing is. There were only a couple grammar mistakes. You use 'your' instead ...

So I'll admit I haven't read the rest of your novel so far up until this point, but you've intrigued me enough with this excerpt that I really want to. ...

This is a very intense piece, but I really like that about it. As it should be for any good lyrical piece, each word seems to be chosen very thoughtfully ...