AlexOfLight

This is awesome!! I honestly don't see anything wrong with it.

Thanks! :D

Thanks for reviewing! I'm probably going to give spoilers in this comment! XD The title? I really don't want to change it. I'll explain why later on, in this comment. ...

I've done that before. :D

:D

I was translating images to text. Yeah, that's kinda it. Thanks!

Yes! You're correct! They are barn owls! :D

Thank you! Yes I'm continuing. :D

It would be hard for people to make me angry. I like looking at things two ways. :D I'll make sure to work on that. :)

Thank you for your review! :D I agree with you. Before I posted this, it was TERRIBLE. I added on to it and stuff, but it just wasn't right. Which ...

What part?

Eh, well they are chosen heroes of legend, not sorcerers. Their Deities made the sword. :)

I have no idea why I put that much space. The prologue was put in italics to make it seem older, and more like a legend is being told. As ...

Okay! :D

I love it! I have a question though. How did you come up with Atana's name? It's a lot like Cortana.