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Alenka

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: It Doesn't Matter

    Hi, Your story is very emotional and touching. I like it how you use descriptive adjectives and adverbs to show feelings. The only thing I would change - I would ...

    Feb 3, 2010


It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong