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Aldiv

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: A Wizard's Best Friend: Part 2/2

    Hahaha I loved it! I aint going to review the thing, because I had to much fun reading it. I love some of your imagery and writing, like the parts ...

    Nov 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Desolate: Prologue-Chapter Two

    Oops, the third thing I meant to put... 3. The breakdown she has. Or kind of has. It is two quick and short, and just seems out of place in ...

    Nov 4, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Reflection

    To be honest the ending was a little vague, I assumed you left it like that on purpose. From your description of her, I figured Meredith and the reflection were ...

    Nov 4, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Untitled for now

    Hey Trinity! So you got a nice start here, but as far as a chapter to something it is very short. I would definitely work on lengthening it a bit. ...

    Nov 4, 2012


Most people ignore most poetry because most poetry ignores most people.
— Adrian Mitchell