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Re: A Wizard's Best Friend: Part 2/2
Hahaha I loved it! I aint going to review the thing, because I had to much fun reading it. I love some of your imagery and writing, like the parts ...
Nov 10, 2012 -
Re: Desolate: Prologue-Chapter Two
Oops, the third thing I meant to put... 3. The breakdown she has. Or kind of has. It is two quick and short, and just seems out of place in ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: Reflection
To be honest the ending was a little vague, I assumed you left it like that on purpose. From your description of her, I figured Meredith and the reflection were ...
Nov 4, 2012 -
Re: Untitled for now
Hey Trinity! So you got a nice start here, but as far as a chapter to something it is very short. I would definitely work on lengthening it a bit. ...
Nov 4, 2012
