Alchemist

Thank you for the reveiw! I really never noticed i was repetitive there, and it is quite a big deal, so glad you spotted it. Nice nitpick at the end, ...

Thank you very much for reading it. :) While i know i have alot of grammar isues that i need to fix, im more concerned about how will people react ...

Thank you very much! I think i won't edit grammar things just now, since id rather write more, but it will help me for the further chapters, and surely when ...

Thank you very much. Since english isn't my first language, i have some trouble with grammar, so this will be very helpful. :)

Hey Silver, one more review i forgot to reply to, im so sorry, i was really busy. Thanks for the grammar nitpicks, some i had already solved on my own, ...

Heeey, i totally forgot that i didn't reply to you'r review, im so sorry(at least you knew my opinion in chat xD). I will have to watch that movie, The ...

Hey, just to make it clear, i didn't mean the sailor himself but the way he acted :) But its not really a big deal. Btw, hope you keep writing ...

Thanks for the review! Bad, stupid and weird things happen, but you have to live through. It's all part of the life, and im really wandering how many weird stories ...

Thank you very much. It's wonderfull to hear such a compliments about my english, and i think, with only two chapters here i have improved it so much, its only ...

Hey there,thanks for reading! You gave me some really useful nitpicks! About the punctuation, i'm pretty sure all i had written is correct in my own language, but i guess ...

Thanks, im trying my best. Well it's only in my language, so i have no idea does that punctuation applies to english. People don't read prologue? :O But i think ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I will correct the author notes, U just didn't pay any attention to them. Yeah, english is my second and this all is quite a ...

Hey, im here again becouse i just remembered i forgot to mention something really picky but it bothered me while reading. I think the currecy(XD), gold-silver relation is weird here. ...

Thank you very much! :) About the sentences you got confused, i think i have idea what are you talking about. :P about typos...man i cant help it. Imagine having ...

Hey there. My first read, I was like 'what the hell is happening here?'. Second read, real fun story unfolded before me. I don't have too much to say, this ...